The previous version of this painting turned out to look more like an illustration than a portrait. I'll continue to play with the other one because I really like the style. But I was asked that I make a more portrait-esque painting. I changed a few things like the height of the boy on the left and a few proportional issues. It's still not done. But, I thought i'd post it so that you could see the general direction that it's taking. Please comment!